To all of you,who are with their dad

What are you waiting for?

Go tell that you love him

If not words, say it from eyes

He needs that too

To all of you who are away from their father

Be patient

A hug will be worth the wait

To all of you who have lost their dad

Dont worry

He is with you on every step of life

To all of you who have issues with their father

Never forget

He wishes only good for his child

To all of you, whose father told them bad

things that made you feel worse

Forgive them

they are humans too

To all of you,who are in whatever situation with their father

Accept that and try to make peace with it

Before finishing….

To all of you who are father’s

We want to let you know that

We love you

We look up to you in the most unimaginable ways

Thank you for loving, protecting and forgiving us

This is my very first attempt at writing a poetry. Please help me improve by sharing your opinion and views in comments.

19 thoughts on “HAPPY FATHER’S DAY

  1. To all who know me in this world, I want to tell you that Sakshi is the best daughter and a sensible girl. You truly are an angel beta….

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  2. πŸ’œ My Dad is Dead EveryOne; it, His Death pleases πŸ™πŸΏ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜‘ 😀 😐 πŸ™„ πŸ™πŸΏ Me EveryBody


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  3. Well done πŸ‘
    First attempt of writing ✍️ poem on Father’s Day

    Amazing words πŸ‘Œ

    Best ever gift 🎁 on Father’s Day from lovely and sweet daughter

    Keep writing ✍️

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  4. Short, sweet and simple. Definitely helps get the message delivered, I liked it! For the tips- I would say maybe explore more words which u could use to replace the simple words with, basically better vocabulary would help.

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